Over all I liked this story. However, there were some crazy writing moments. First one fox is fleeing from Beatrix Potter, the author who seems to kills all her captured animals. Then fleeing in to the forest, there is a swamp with an alligator to fight off. I'm pretty sure Ms. Potter didn't move to Florida and I'm also pretty sure wild alligators won't be found in England forests. If I were the editor, I would have asked to have that rewritten. The story, other then that, works out fine.
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